Audience Feedback 10: Throne Rough Cut 14

This is some feedback I got for the rough cut 14 from our teacher. If these are done, then the next one should be the final cut. 

remove flickering effect on the fast paced sequence

1.16 the fist seems a bit too much, try to layer with something else where he is not singing

1.20 try and put the cream fight in slow-mo and keep the pool shot layered until 1.26 

1.35 reverse the shot of the singer jumping and the singer running 

1.44 cross-cut the shot of the layered guitarist